19.6.08

It Doesn't Hang Together


Regretting the last line just long enough

to cross it

that acute sensation of existence

(featherweight heartthrob)

a life of choice given but unchosen,
unspecified warrant for animation

served, you are
imperceptibly raped by your own soul

soft pet caged in a sunbeam,
cars faulting by the open window

a cheater’s peace
of crushed greens

Commonplace, commonplace and desperate

to shell and fuck,
a stem with interesting leaves

the first and foremost crack in the foundation.

3 comments:

Charmi said...

This is a finely crafted piece, Mark. Thanks for posting it.

Mark said...

Thanks, Charmi. I was trying something different. That book "Tremble" by C.D. Wright that you lent me is excellent, and was an influence.

June 19, 2008 5:42 PM

Rachel said...

Mark, I like a lot of the lines in this piece. Good stuff.

"Commonplace, commonplace and desperate//to shell and fuck,/"...

LOVE THAT.