19.6.08
It Doesn't Hang Together
Regretting the last line just long enough
to cross it
that acute sensation of existence
(featherweight heartthrob)
a life of choice given but unchosen,
unspecified warrant for animation
served, you are
imperceptibly raped by your own soul
soft pet caged in a sunbeam,
cars faulting by the open window
a cheater’s peace
of crushed greens
Commonplace, commonplace and desperate
to shell and fuck,
a stem with interesting leaves
the first and foremost crack in the foundation.
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3 comments:
This is a finely crafted piece, Mark. Thanks for posting it.
Thanks, Charmi. I was trying something different. That book "Tremble" by C.D. Wright that you lent me is excellent, and was an influence.
June 19, 2008 5:42 PM
Mark, I like a lot of the lines in this piece. Good stuff.
"Commonplace, commonplace and desperate//to shell and fuck,/"...
LOVE THAT.
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