15.3.08

Whiling


I sit in the grass
making chains of adverbs
to lay atop your proverbial crown.
Necks of daisies bend back
for my gangliest laurels.
When a small early locust lands
on your thigh, with yellow-green legs
you smile spritely.
Expertly.
Aboriginally.
It is like you are the base state of glory
the world returns to
after every war.

3 comments:

Charmi said...

"the base state of glory" nice.

Rachel said...

I like the ending very much. I agree with Charmi regarding "the base state of glory"...beautiful.

I also generally like the spring-y, playful tone of this piece. You'll have to teach me how to carry that off sometime. ;)

Mark said...

The last three lines came very spontaneously--I was happy with them as well.

Springy, playful... well, you have to be in that mood.

I must credit my friend SaraEve for the beginning of this one, it's very similar to one of hers.