15.3.08
Whiling
I sit in the grass
making chains of adverbs
to lay atop your proverbial crown.
Necks of daisies bend back
for my gangliest laurels.
When a small early locust lands
on your thigh, with yellow-green legs
you smile spritely.
Expertly.
Aboriginally.
It is like you are the base state of glory
the world returns to
after every war.
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3 comments:
"the base state of glory" nice.
I like the ending very much. I agree with Charmi regarding "the base state of glory"...beautiful.
I also generally like the spring-y, playful tone of this piece. You'll have to teach me how to carry that off sometime. ;)
The last three lines came very spontaneously--I was happy with them as well.
Springy, playful... well, you have to be in that mood.
I must credit my friend SaraEve for the beginning of this one, it's very similar to one of hers.
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